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Shiver
By midnights voice
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Yeah , you get a shiver in the dark
Your shadow hugs you tight
and in the meantime . . .
You get a colored drink
in a crowded bar
where you are a nobody . . .
So nobody is your name
The band is Dixie Up
They like to dixie down
four time and
Loud ! Loud ! Loud !
All the pixies ply you for their drinks
Sluring fifthy things . . .
Can't help it as you smile . . .
White breasted women
step up to the microphone
and they can
Sing ! Sing ! Sing !
The hour is getting late
Looking for a mate
as I slip off a golden ring
Competition is so tough
Get lucky , comes the rush . . .
way on down South
under lights , on Friday night
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Copyright 2018 midnights voice
Published on Wednesday, January 17, 2018.
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On Sunday, August 5, 2018, I IS ME
(406)
wrote:
Graphics remind us of a disco era but you've deceived us before. we have missed you your comments to I IS ME had an effect on our poetry
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On Thursday, January 18, 2018, dwells
(4285) wrote:
Much truth MV. I've frequented a few C&W bars down in Homestead, Fla. over the years and back in the 20th century. Never got lucky though until I met my wife and asked her for a dance during last call :) Cheers my friend! - Dan
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On Friday, January 19, 2018, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Ha ha , the memories ! Thank you Dan for reading .
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On Thursday, January 18, 2018, Cassette
(1144) wrote:
"You get a colored drink in a crowded bar where you are a nobody . . . " I love this line, mv
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On Thursday, January 18, 2018, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Thank you Cassette , being a nobody gives one a sense of security .
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On Thursday, January 18, 2018, Cassette
(1144) wrote:
I can understand that. I very often fly under the radar as nobody
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On Wednesday, January 17, 2018, Arwen
(187) wrote:
I have seen married men flirt up a storm with their ring on. I was just as awkward as I could possibly be. I seem to be a different kind of nobody. I liked it though. No I've never been to a bar.
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On Wednesday, January 17, 2018, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Haven't missed much . More of a soctal comment .
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