Reality

By midnights voice

   Reality

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We walk the edge of separation
fall into despair
or elation

Don't tell me you know the difference
as you vaseline
the compliance

The week is full of weaks
(SIC)
Tweet after tweet

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Copyright 2018 midnights voice
Published on Thursday, January 11, 2018.     Filed under: "Graphic Art"
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  • dwells On Friday, January 12, 2018, dwells (5806)By person wrote:

    Like the way you used an adjective for a noun in the last stanza MV. Gives new, multifarious meanings to titillate the imagination. Cheers my friend! - Dan

  • midnights voice On Friday, January 12, 2018, midnights voice (1263)By person wrote:

    Thank you Dan for reading and revealing comment .

  • Wednesday Addams On Thursday, January 11, 2018, Wednesday Addams (312)By person wrote:

    I like the 1st lines. I don't understand what (SIC) means. I have thoughts about the other lines that I cannot even put into words. Tweet after tweet makes me think this is a political type of poem. Anyhow it is just a guess haha!

  • midnights voice On Thursday, January 11, 2018, midnights voice (1263)By person wrote:

    It all depends on how it affects you Wednesday . Everyone has a doffered experience . Thank you for reading .

  • Cassette On Thursday, January 11, 2018, Cassette (1368)By person wrote:

    You always pick the most lovely images to accompany your work. this is complex and vivid; great job.

  • midnights voice On Thursday, January 11, 2018, midnights voice (1263)By person wrote:

    Thank you Cassette . The images help convey the meaning more than a thousand words . Sorry I had to say that !

  • Jerry stiles On Thursday, January 11, 2018, Jerry stiles (416)By person wrote:

    Nice write m.v.,,

  • midnights voice On Thursday, January 11, 2018, midnights voice (1263)By person wrote:

    Thank you Jerry for reading .

  • hazydaisy On Thursday, January 11, 2018, hazydaisy (166)By person wrote:

    This could be one of my favorites of yours. I love the tone- indifferent, unattached, clinical. The last stanza is especially interesting.

  • midnights voice On Thursday, January 11, 2018, midnights voice (1263)By person wrote:

    Thank you hazydaisy for your exquisite commentary .

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