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...Rendition
By SolApathy
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EsGiBwK4Ycc
Into the bliss of your carnal kiss
Breath subdued
As my soul melts within you
Dire consequences envelope
As my impossible love develops
Burning away chaotic melancholy memories
I embrace your synergy as happiness blooms
Russet orbs light up the room
Bane of my past washed away at long last
I dream in kaleidoscope hues
Brought to tears by this unlikely muse
Lost in this VR love affair
Only I don’t really care
I left reality –
escaping to whom I wished to be
The person I prayed you would someday see
I no longer feel my body, weak
IV solution stops dripping as I seek
Salvation for dire wounds
This emulated world –Consumes
My last breath echoes hollow though unheard ears
You’ll find me a wasted corpse watered by your tears
Look through the VR screen and see
All I wanted was for it to be you and me…
Breath subdued
As my soul melts within you
Dire consequences envelope
As my impossible love develops
Burning away chaotic melancholy memories
I embrace your synergy as happiness blooms
Russet orbs light up the room
Bane of my past washed away at long last
I dream in kaleidoscope hues
Brought to tears by this unlikely muse
Lost in this VR love affair
Only I don’t really care
I left reality –
escaping to whom I wished to be
The person I prayed you would someday see
I no longer feel my body, weak
IV solution stops dripping as I seek
Salvation for dire wounds
This emulated world –Consumes
My last breath echoes hollow though unheard ears
You’ll find me a wasted corpse watered by your tears
Look through the VR screen and see
All I wanted was for it to be you and me…
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© 2020 SolApathy
Published on Thursday, January 4, 2018.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
Tell me of the dreams you wished you could steal if you knew you could make even one of them...RealComments on "...Rendition "
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On Sunday, August 1, 2021, mysticventures
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wrote:
Chilling write. Yet full of wonder!! And the Author's Note...... just set me ablaze!
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On Friday, January 5, 2018, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Such a beautiful song and words of Yuna's . Your's come hard on reality . But on which side of the fence ?
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On Friday, January 5, 2018, Cassette
(1144) wrote:
I'm not going to lie, virtual reality is a bit of a nightmare for me; not being able to tell real from fake... not a place I want to put myself, y'know?
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On Thursday, January 4, 2018, dwells
(4285) wrote:
It's another world and your author's note is exquisitely crafted; but such dreams require a mutual participation, and that is the hard part as I'm certain we dreamers all longingly know. Cheers my friend! - Dan
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