...Magnetic Perfection

By SolApathy

As I lay here, still dizzy
You left your handprint upon my soul
I’m unwilling to yet let go
Magnetism of your sunrise eyes
Pulls the stars from the sky
Feel the allure of my sigh
As my hand brushed upon your thigh
Glanced in my direction –We felt a connection
Polar-opposite attraction
Unexpected reaction
Your eyes locked with mine
We kissed across the room- Devine
Around the universe burned
Our ethereal embrace churns
Sensual winds blow upon this earthly vessel
Breaking the status-quo
-- an unlikely love unfolds--
Yet we have never touched - -Why is it we both blush?
Magnetic perfection –We glide across the room
Into each other’s embrace of a star-lit moon
These are the images conjured within my mind
Even as you were never here-  Across a distance unbroken
In this text based world in which we have so many times—Spoken

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Published on Sunday, December 3, 2017.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

...In a world where love may never touch--Our typed words means so much
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  • dwells On Sunday, December 3, 2017, dwells (5715)By person wrote:

    Never guessed where this was going until the ending, and dumbfounded by the artistry of the overall approach to a classical theme. Le sigh, and cheers Sol! - Dan

  • SolApathy On Sunday, December 3, 2017, SolApathy (521)By person wrote:

    Glad to see you can still be surprised my friend :)

  • Drea On Saturday, December 2, 2017, Drea (1522)By person wrote:

    Everything about this screams. It aches. Such emotion.

  • Bornfrompain On Saturday, December 2, 2017, Bornfrompain (837)By person wrote:

    You have such a wonderful way with words my friend!!! Excellent Excellent Excellent piece!!! - BFP

  • A former member wrote: I am rendered speechless, dearest. Rebs:).

  • sheff On Saturday, December 2, 2017, sheff (109)By person wrote:

    Longing for a beautiful thing that has yet to unfold. The imaginative burning - bravo

  • Anna McCarra On Saturday, December 2, 2017, Anna McCarra (408)By person wrote:

    This is really beautiful, so much so that I'm at a loss for words at the moment. So full of love and longing. So sensual. I've read it twice through already...maybe third time is the charm and then I can attempt a proper comment? Scholar

  • Anna McCarra On Monday, December 4, 2017, Anna McCarra (408)By person wrote:

    I love every word of this. Romantic and sensual; bursting with magical realism. "Magnetism of your sunrise eyes/Pulls the stars from the sky"...I think is my favorite line, as it shows how tangible this moment is as you paint it in your mind. Scholar


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