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Straight Forward
By morbiddemonchild
When Death is near you beg for life
Not the sharp end of this steel knife
No blood to take over your head
But in the end
It won't even matter
Because you'll be dead
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Copyright 2003 morbiddemonchild
Published on Friday, September 26, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Straight Forward"
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On Saturday, September 27, 2003, SilentStalker
(1066)
wrote:
...nice...I feel rage here for some reason...maybe I'm wrong...but I like it... -Darun
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On Tuesday, September 30, 2003, morbiddemonchild
(33) wrote:
there was some rage. this kind of stuff gets written when i'm pissed. but no fear. none of you are in mortal danger.
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On Friday, September 26, 2003, Demosthenes
(155) wrote:
i think i get it. it kinda irks me when people give reference to one of their own poems in a comment, but im a hypocrite, and this reminds me of something i wrote a little bit. its good. -B
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A former member wrote:
i don't understand the point... the idea didn't make it across to me... unless i'm trying to read too much into it.
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