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After All These Years
By midnights voice
Yellow sunshine sad
almost glad
almost . . .
I . . .
can feel you touching me
after all these years
I wonder how you are feeling now
I wonder where you are
Behind which star . . .
are you hiding
Are we playing hide and seek ?
Twenty-five years ago
. . . gone . . .
. . . . . . goodbye . . .
Like a knife to my heart
But I bleed not any more
long ago I . . .
I lost the last drop . . .
such a long time ago
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Copyright 2017 midnights voice
Published on Friday, July 28, 2017.
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On Friday, December 15, 2017, ToxicLove
(39)
wrote:
Great write. I truly felt a pain in the words as I lost a baby too. She never leaves my thoughts even as many say forgive, forget... move on, yet I cannot forget her birth day nor her yearly birthday, wondering who or what she might be today. She would be 30 now. Thanks for sharing ~ Toxic Love ~
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On Friday, December 15, 2017, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Thank you Toxic Love for your heartfelt comment .
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On Sunday, August 6, 2017, Just Dave
(457) wrote:
Tears. I read poetry to be moved, somehow altered. Great write. JD
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On Sunday, August 6, 2017, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Thank you Dave for reading .
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On Saturday, July 29, 2017, tmanzano
(210) wrote:
It is in the rhythm of this that is moving. The words have a slow rolling, almost hazed affect to them. Like trying to wake up from a bomb that had gone off near my head. Very moving.
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On Saturday, July 29, 2017, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Whoa ! Bombs ! Head ! Ha ha , thank you again tmanzano for your outstanding comment .
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On Friday, July 28, 2017, worm
(1194) wrote:
even though we can't , or won't, understand why, every life is as long as it should be... God is in control...
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On Saturday, July 29, 2017, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Yes so true worm . Thank you for reading .
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On Friday, July 28, 2017, Arwen
(187) wrote:
A life shouldn't be cut so short.
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On Saturday, July 29, 2017, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Thank you Wednesday Addams .
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A former member wrote:
This really got to me, there is no tragedy like losing someone so young. I had a younger brother who died when he was two years old, and from what I was told, a bit of my father died with him. I couldn't help it but to shed a few tears for you. This is sad but so beautifully written. Rebs:).
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On Friday, July 28, 2017, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Oh losing a sibling so young must have devasted you . My heart goes out to you for the eternal hole left in your life . Thank you Rebs for reading .
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On Friday, July 28, 2017, Lab Rat
(131) wrote:
This took me to places I'd not been in some time. Thank you for that. Well woven poetry, this
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On Friday, July 28, 2017, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Thank you Lab Rat , I'm glad my poem touched you .
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