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Afraid
By morbiddemonchild
The excitement held within
under my skin
i have an uncontrolable doubt
that once i'm in i'll be right back out
of your life
my heart cut with a knife
of emotional stress
taking life just as a test
unflinching i turn away
i was never going to stay
here with the pain
knowing one day
you'd want to get away
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Copyright 2003 morbiddemonchild
Published on Wednesday, September 24, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Afraid"
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On Wednesday, September 24, 2003, Blinded_Tiger
(518)
wrote:
Argh fear ruins everything, dosnt it? damn... Tiger
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On Thursday, September 25, 2003, morbiddemonchild
(33) wrote:
i would have to say that it does. i wrote this when my now boyfriend asked me out and i hadn't told him yes. i hvae to admit i have no skill whatsoever in writing poetry. i write what is in my head wheater it makes sense or not. it makes sense to me.
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On Friday, September 26, 2003, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
you say you have no skill, yet we all read and respect your poetry...I'd say you have what it takes... -Darun
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On Tuesday, September 30, 2003, morbiddemonchild
(33) wrote:
thank you so very much. i feel i have no talent but i shall take your word for it. i am, after all, my worst critic.
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On Monday, September 29, 2003, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
Yep me too. ¦Ñªê
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