Adam always wondered about Eve

By midnights voice

Adam always wondered about Eve

Adam ,
sitting on a rock
outside the garden of Eden
rubbing his sore ribcage

"What the Hell just happened ?"

Eve comes over
and sits beside him
putting an arm around him
and laying her head on his shoulder
then says ,

"Peanutbutter and jelly or takeout ?"

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Copyright 2017 midnights voice
Published on Saturday, June 17, 2017.     Filed under: "Graphic Art"
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  • Candy Cain On Friday, November 10, 2017, Candy Cain (39)By person wrote:

    xD i love this so much. the ending has such a punch. reminds me of something i'd make.

  • A former member wrote: That last line brought a broad smile to my face, although I would always prefer take-out to peanut butter and jelly. Great job, dearie. Rebs:).

  • midnights voice On Sunday, September 10, 2017, midnights voice (1067)By person wrote:

    I'm glad I couldake you smile . Thank you Rebs .

  • dwells On Monday, June 19, 2017, dwells (5713)By person wrote:

    Totally unexpected MV, but then some things never change :) Cheers! - Dan

  • midnights voice On Monday, June 19, 2017, midnights voice (1067)By person wrote:

    Ha ha , I started to put spare ribs or takeout but that would be to obvious .

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