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Crawl Space
By midnights voice
Dirt
Block
Wood
Basic definition
Plus space always between
As a boy so inviting
The dogs liked it
Spiders liked it
I liked it
I could see feet come and go
Hear car doors slam
Someone asking ,
Where's Tom run off to ?
That day
The fight inside spilled out
Angry steps
Yells and screams
Shouts
The sound of fists hitting flesh
Breaking bones
You crumpled to the ground
Vacant eyes staring at me
But you couldn't see
Blood began running
Hands picking you up
I could hear you
Bouncing on the back seat
The door slammed
Another opened
"Slam"
The car roared angrily
Gravel flung everywhere
Dust settled
All's quite
Did I tell you
It's cool under here ?
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Copyright 2017 midnights voice
Published on Thursday, June 15, 2017.
Filed under:
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Comments on "Crawl Space"
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On Saturday, February 17, 2018, Poetic-Realm
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wrote:
Did it ruin the crawl space for you or did you find a way to still enjoy it?
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On Saturday, February 17, 2018, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Ha ha , no it didn't ruin my love of dark dangerous places . Thank you for reading Poetic-Realm .
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On Tuesday, June 20, 2017, worm
(1194) wrote:
as children, we all had "Crawl Space"... sometimes it was good other times, not so much... and we wonder why this world is so screwed up... a deserving kudos to you, sir!
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On Tuesday, June 20, 2017, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Thank you worm for reading and commenting .
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On Friday, June 16, 2017, dwells
(4285) wrote:
An unforgettable vision MV; especially for a youngster. My brother got hired by a neighbor to spread Chlordane ant dust under his house - not for me...Cheers for this slice of real life - Dan (guessing she survived?)
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On Saturday, June 17, 2017, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Thank you Dwells I appreciate all your efforts to read and comment . And the answer is yes .
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