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By Purposelessness




I hear dripping taps
In dreams as I see myself 
Drowned in shallow streams



 

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Copyright 2017 Purposelessness
Published on Wednesday, June 7, 2017.     Filed under: "Haiku" and "Poetry"
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  • Alchemist On Tuesday, May 22, 2018, Alchemist (688)By person wrote:

    Drowned in the shallows is a great analogy.

  • Devil lyn On Thursday, June 8, 2017, Devil lyn (368)By person wrote:

    I like this ,.. it says something far more than what is written ... It`s been awhile since I read Haiku ... Enjoyed

  • A former member wrote: good haiku, and in the tradition of haiku would be just as effective without any title

  • Purposelessness On Thursday, June 8, 2017, Purposelessness (150)By person wrote:

    Thank you. The idea wasn't a haiku at the start, but ended up making it into one. I'd prefer no title actually and I didn't want to call it "Untitled", so I've thought about it and went with just "."

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