Shallow water
By molock
Disconnected,
...reaching out.
immune to affection,
crumbling down....
shallow water,
...in too deep.
never bothered
to look before you
leap.
​out of breath,
let love rest in
peace...
under silent protest,
​spiral and descend...
emotionally suppressed,
...when will it end?
​is the charade over yet?
​still waiting for love's
​last breath...
Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited.
Ask the author first.
Copyright 2017 molock
Comments on "Shallow water"
Log in to post comments.
-
On Sunday, June 4, 2017, Drea
(1443) wrote:
Nothing can fix that kind of pain. It just runs its course. I love the way you describe it. You have a way with words.
-
On Sunday, June 4, 2017, dwells
(4289) wrote:
Going down for the third time my friend Mo? I'll loan you my swimmies. An apt metaphor here, cheers! - Dan
-
On Wednesday, May 31, 2017, Devil lyn
(368) wrote:
It takes a lot to break a heart but when it breaks. . .beware. Every other heart after becomes a mistrust. Beautiful and haunting ink, big bro m0.
-
On Wednesday, May 31, 2017, molock
(314) wrote:
thanks sis, I wrote this one years ago when me and my soulmate were separated ....I was truly heart broken at the time. but we got back together it will be 20yrs in oct. anyway thanks for the kind words as always. later sis Dev - m0
-
A former member wrote:
This was raw and it clicked with me. The flow of the words were beautifully done, great piece.
-
On Wednesday, May 31, 2017, molock
(314) wrote:
thank you so much for the positive vibe. Cheers - m0
-
On Wednesday, May 31, 2017, Quill
(48) wrote:
Watching love die and being helpless... great write
-
On Wednesday, May 31, 2017, molock
(314) wrote:
thanks Q, always good to hear from ya. peace brother - m0
-
On Wednesday, May 31, 2017, Phalanx
(677) wrote:
Clever, swim much?
-
On Wednesday, May 31, 2017, molock
(314) wrote:
thanks man. not since I saw my goldfish drown ...that shit was fucked up. peace brother - m0