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Ever Here
By Purposelessness
I live again, but can't recall
The life I once abhorred
Now and then I see a smile
A twitch, a flick, a twisted lip
Visions dart upon my eyes
Greyed out windows
Blackened skies
But nothing seen belies the truth
We all live beneath one roof
Repeating lives and days and death
Ever here with one more breath
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Copyright 2017 Purposelessness
Published on Tuesday, February 28, 2017.
Filed under: "Philosophical" and
"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, March 1, 2017, Drea
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wrote:
Everything about this was done right. The structure. The way you broke up the lines. You managed to deliver your message in such an eloquent way. This was good. I'm enjoying everything I read from you.
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On Friday, March 3, 2017, Purposelessness
(150) wrote:
Thank you Drea. Always great to hear from my favourite writers around here :)
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A former member wrote:
What a very lovely way to articulate being stuck in the proverbial rut. This really resonates with me because I feel like where I'm at is living the same damn day over and over again. Anything to break the monotony would be welcome. Good job, dearie. Reb:).
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On Wednesday, March 1, 2017, Purposelessness
(150) wrote:
Thank you so much. It's been like this for me for a while and only very recently I have moved house and it's been stressful, but now the rut seems to have dissolved. Maybe writing this has helped with the rut dissolution :)
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On Tuesday, February 28, 2017, Jerry stiles
(251) wrote:
Sounds like dejavu,,I can't spell,,sorry,,good poem,,keep written,,
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On Wednesday, March 1, 2017, Purposelessness
(150) wrote:
Thanks Jerry :)
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