The Girl

By Rebel_Angel

When I look into the mirror I see a girl. A girl who is neglected by the world. She keeps all her secrets and fears to herself, never once has she slipped up. No one knows everything about her, or even comes close. She wears a mask that many don?t see through, and the ones that do don?t care enough to explore. Sometimes someone breaks down her walls and gets into her head, never will they repair the damage they have done. She is left with a heap of shattered hopes and dreams once again.

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Copyright 2003 Rebel_Angel
Published on Thursday, September 18, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • dropsofhate On Monday, January 17, 2005, dropsofhate (45)By person wrote:

    i like this a lot.

  • Deadly Embrace On Friday, June 18, 2004, Deadly Embrace (41)By person wrote:

    i really like this one.. reminds me of me. well done -DE

  • Angel With The Scabbed Wings On Wednesday, April 28, 2004, Angel With The Scabbed Wings (40)By person wrote:

    Exellent peice, being isolated form the rest of hte world Makes for creative writing

  • Drea On Saturday, December 20, 2003, Drea (1443)By person wrote:

    this caused me to cry. memories that i still dont want to face. thank you for this ~Drea~

  • BlackRobedMage On Friday, September 19, 2003, BlackRobedMage (16)By person wrote:

    I so relate to this poem and it fills me with sorrow that others do too.

  • _Andrew_ On Friday, September 19, 2003, _Andrew_ (245)By person wrote:

    I'm here for you, jus feel free to talk to me :) *~*aNDReW*~*

  • blackdarkness On Friday, September 19, 2003, blackdarkness (228)By person wrote:

    i know how you feel.....

  • Aurora_Light On Thursday, September 18, 2003, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    never give up ok we love lots nice job by the way

  • Mauler On Thursday, September 18, 2003, Mauler (4)By person wrote:

    When the world neglects you, neglect it back.

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