There

By liquid_emotion

I know the sun is shining
somewhere through the rain
Because I can see the colored arches
form across the lane
The trees that break my vision
stretch on either side
And shelter unseen miracles
that sought them out to hide
The earth is newly bathed
and left a freshened sheen
As scents rise from the ground
of dust and warmth and green
And in this moment I can see
a softness in the air
Which makes me stop and realize
that I'm already there

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Copyright 2003 liquid_emotion
Published on Sunday, September 14, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Dilated View On Tuesday, December 29, 2009, Dilated View (583)By person wrote:

    Powerful and gorgeous. Those pristine moments of clarity. Gotta love it.

  • Moonflower On Tuesday, May 1, 2007, Moonflower (301)By person wrote:

    so beautiful and lighthearted

  • WinterGrave On Thursday, November 6, 2003, WinterGrave (258)By person wrote:

    its nice to read something peaceful once in awhole...great write.~~~Grave

  • GreekPhilosopher On Sunday, October 5, 2003, GreekPhilosopher (156)By person wrote:

    Great. Serene. Peaceful. Nice. Enjoyed. GPhD.

  • A former member wrote: Absolutely beautiful, just like your eyes.

  • liquid_emotion On Tuesday, September 30, 2003, liquid_emotion (323)By person wrote:

    Thank you!

  • A former member wrote: of course you are welcome

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Wednesday, September 24, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (1703)By person wrote:

    Great to see a new piece from you! I've missed reading your words these past few months. Loved this one - very peaceful! Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • A former member wrote: well written, your flow and word play is simply perfect i really like your style,great job Scholar

  • Bloodofdeadpoets On Tuesday, September 16, 2003, Bloodofdeadpoets (55)By person wrote:

    very nice piece, its been so long i had almost forgotten the brilliance of your work, this poem was indeed a treat to read, thanks for sharing

  • Six-Out On Sunday, September 14, 2003, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    LIQUID!!! It's been so long since I've read your writes...where the hell have you been? I think you should stop by more often, this was magnificant. Every detail made me feel as if I was there. Bravo.

  • liquid_emotion On Tuesday, September 30, 2003, liquid_emotion (323)By person wrote:

    Sixxy!! grassyass.

  • A former member wrote: I never understood how someone could hate the rain. It bathes the world and washes away Earth's bad memories. Very nicely written. ~Urban Shipwreck~

  • A former member wrote: i have to agree, i can see what you are talking about, nice write, its what i needed right now. keep writing!

  • Crystal Passion On Sunday, September 14, 2003, Crystal Passion (221)By person wrote:

    well written! i can actually see everything you're talking about -kRyz

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