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The Sky; Its Wispy Veil Dispelled
By lupus tenebrae
The sky, a vast blue
with its wispy veil
dispelled, shone radiant and
infinite; spanning seas.
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Copyright 2016 lupus tenebrae
Published on Saturday, April 16, 2016.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
A simple kimo written on the clearest skies I've seen in days.Comments on "The Sky; Its Wispy Veil Dispelled"
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On Sunday, April 17, 2016, dwells
(4285)
wrote:
Kiss spring goodby and say Hi to summer Wolfie. Not familiar with the form but reminiscent of a re-arranged haiku kinda-sorta. Korean maybe? Cheers! - Dan
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On Saturday, April 16, 2016, tmanzano
(210) wrote:
I am overwhelmed by the strength of this work. It sent a thousands pounds of visions and imagery from three lines. I am completely impressed. 10
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On Saturday, April 16, 2016, blue
(1454) wrote:
To create such a vast expanse with so few words is an possessed by very few. And, the sky... the sky... has always held a deep fascination for me. Your reach is sometimes astounding. ~b
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On Saturday, April 16, 2016, blue
(1454) wrote:
...is an art possessed*
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