From Beyond ( Version II / Part I )

By Damon Tarloth


Part I
Seeking out the chosen one,
your desire spreads once begun.
Power tainting, strong chains hold,
feeding from a time of old...

Flowing through emotion or an act,
to gain, you must give to the pact.
No exception, dark demented cost,
something precious, or all will be lost...

There's always cost, to find, unleash, to bind.
Rituals of power taint the mind.
This all must be done to aggregate.
Blood, seduction, hate, will generate.
The more you give, the more you will create...
 
Part II
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DAMON TARLOTH
 
(Version I) was good, but hopefully the alterations of
implementing a mix of Trochaic & Iambic meter
has improved the flow and overall quality of
From Beyond ( Version II )
The 2nd part of this version
is still under construction,
and will be finished very soon...
 
I might of made this poem worse... lol

© 10 months ago, Damon   

 


 

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Copyright 2016 Damon Tarloth
Published on Tuesday, April 12, 2016.     Filed under: "Poetry"

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