No Help

By BoyBackFromWar

BOOM!
BOOM!
BOOM!

He looks up into heaven
searching for help,
but he gets no answer.
A shooting star cuts
the sky and leaves a bright,
fading path on the dark sky before
she disappears into the night.
The only thing left is
the bashing march
of the metal beast
as it gets closer.

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Copyright 2016 BoyBackFromWar
Published on Monday, March 14, 2016.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • Devilish On Thursday, March 17, 2016, Devilish (2657)By person wrote:

    Damn!!! There's no way Seleno could of read lol not for her comment to be "very lovely" ... This was a very short visual into your hell .............. hello there ... i'm Devilish Scholar

  • BoyBackFromWar On Friday, March 18, 2016, BoyBackFromWar (16)By person wrote:

    Hi! I guess that everybody has a right to an opinion, even though it sometimes sounds absurd. I am new to writing so I appreciate any kind of feedback or criticism.

  • Selenophile On Monday, March 14, 2016, Selenophile (22)By person wrote:

    Very lovely.

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