Pieces

By ColorMeToxic

Junk
Cluttered thinking
Irrational
Broken pieces
Upheaval
Age of five
Changed
Failed to thrive
Depression
Chronic type
Abuse
Mental strike
Healing
Takes forever
Liner
Reach it never.




 

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Copyright 2016 Beth
Published on Tuesday, January 5, 2016.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I am not only curious about much of your writing themes but why you are so sporatic in writing. Are your moods or inspirations coming with long pauses? I ask only because there is a particular haunting quality about your work that begs to be examined. I enjoyed this work but felt the disillusionment and hollow sense of pain flowing through the pen. Nonetheless, an excellent work.

  • soul_versing On Wednesday, January 6, 2016, soul_versing (882)By person wrote:

    Because that's all you can articulate when your brain is going through spouts of emotional change. I particularly liked your ending, reveals your true emotional state that you're struggling with at this currant time, with no sugarcoating. I want nothing more than to hold you snuggly in my arms. -with... .hugs, puffy pillows and warm chocolate chip cookies. Scholar

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