burn me

By beamish

Love dances atop a candle flame

It's fragile, it's brilliant, it's dangerous

It blinds me with its beauty
It bends at a slight breeze

I hold my wrist over love enduring  the pain, the pain that leaves the beautiful scars of remembrance

I love it's flicker
I hate its smoldering pain

Please scar me for eternity i beg of you my love my flame 

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Copyright 2016 beamish
Published on Friday, January 15, 2016.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • motherofnature On Tuesday, February 14, 2017, motherofnature (46)By person wrote:

    wisely written no regrets

  • A former member wrote: These words are crafted so expertly. I applaud your wisdom. Thank you for sharing.

  • soul_versing On Wednesday, March 16, 2016, soul_versing (882)By person wrote:

    Gorgeous piece so perverse in its brilliant nature. .tips hat. -Write on Scholar

  • Broken Rose On Sunday, January 3, 2016, Broken Rose (9)By person wrote:

    Absolutely beautiful, sad, but beautiful. " I hold my wrist over love enduring the pain, the pain that leaves the beautiful scars of remembrance" love this line, its tragic but beautiful. Well done keep writing!

  • Noel Haiasi On Thursday, February 25, 2016, Noel Haiasi (36)By person wrote:

    I agree, that line really stuck out to me. Great job friend, keep it up!

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