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Crystal No Longer
By Crystal Passion
A detached spiral staircase to nowhere
spiraling into the unencunbered abyss of solitude
Where will you take me?
Where does it lead?
Simply cast away the final trappings of the love that tithes me to him
Take me where you please, just get me there fleetingly
so that I may begin my day of reckoning
and that what remains
is the empty shell
of the crystal
he once made me
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Copyright 2003 Kryztal_Prizon
Published on Wednesday, September 10, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Crystal No Longer"
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A former member wrote:
This is beautiful. It speaks of a wistfulness not often seen in loss.
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A former member wrote:
Wow, this is such a powerfully wonderful write
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A former member wrote:
Oh, the miseries of life; how we love to love, and hate it at the same time. Inspiring piece, good luck.
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On Tuesday, September 16, 2003, _Andrew_
(245)
wrote:
bleh... i felt like i was going to cry... fact is if it was true love we'll never forget, and from what i feel i haven't forgotten yet, i find i lie to myself more often than i once thought *~*aNDReW*~*
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On Sunday, September 14, 2003, Delphoid-Q
(213) wrote:
Oooh, pretty. It even looks like a crystal. No, seriously now, it was striking and imaginative. Very well done.
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On Thursday, September 11, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
Very nice, but never give up because if oyu do you could miss something great!
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On Thursday, September 11, 2003, manywalks
(750) wrote:
This slices its way deep into the soul and mind, poignant and striking. ~ mw
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A former member wrote:
Don't be sad, lots of fishies in the sea! All you need to do is bait the hook and you will catch a big one! Yay!
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On Thursday, September 11, 2003, worm
(1194) wrote:
~kryz... poignant to the point of tears... the understanding that it is all over is, in reality, a blessing in disguise... as urban said, "nicely written!"
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A former member wrote:
Sad write but sometimes all we need is to complete the (sometimes long) road to closure. Very nicely written. ~Urban Shipwreck~
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On Wednesday, September 10, 2003, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
I am on my way
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