War

By lupus tenebrae

WAR
service
sacrifice

soldiers, steadfast on
desert sand, purple hearts
persevering for our sake

"The nightmare, just before sweet dreams."

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Copyright 2015 lupus tenebrae
Published on Wednesday, November 11, 2015.     Filed under: "Tribute" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

A meager offering for Veterans Day, showcasing the style of a clarity pyramid.
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  • magpythief On Tuesday, August 16, 2016, magpythief (2)By person wrote:

    I cannot break from my musical ear. However, the subject is enticing. Also, why desert sand? I hear there are forests in the holy land.

  • soul_versing On Thursday, November 12, 2015, soul_versing (882)By person wrote:

    The nightmares they face, and all their sacrifices only to ensure our sweet dreams. You've painted a strong visual, a strong visual that speaks a thousand words. Such an honoring piece fit for our veterans. .hugs. Scholar

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Wednesday, November 11, 2015, TropicalSnowstorm (1703)By person wrote:

    I like the style! Is this something you came up with, or an existing form? Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • lupus tenebrae On Wednesday, November 11, 2015, lupus tenebrae (872)By person wrote:

    It's a form I came across while researching minimalist styles, this is only my second attempt at one. It's definitely a huge departure from the haiku and all its variants. Scholar

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