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Dark Poetry
By whisperingwalls
6 Feet under Rock-Bottom
a Catacomb of Concrete and Quicksand
a Vagabond Child of the Streets
; Where both Father-Time and Mother-Goose lost Custody
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Copyright 2015 Zak Laforest
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On Friday, July 6, 2018, Jonas Robinson
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wrote:
Short but deep. Good work.
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On Wednesday, September 22, 2021, whisperingwalls
(219) wrote:
Thanks for the read!
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On Sunday, January 21, 2018, carlosjackal
(3015) wrote:
Absolutely brilliant.
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On Wednesday, September 22, 2021, whisperingwalls
(219) wrote:
And to you good Sir!
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A former member wrote:
Hehe, clever little stanza
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On Thursday, February 18, 2016, hazydaisy
(132) wrote:
ooooooooooh man. that last line
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On Wednesday, September 22, 2021, whisperingwalls
(219) wrote:
Thank you kindly for reading!
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On Friday, November 6, 2015, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
"both father time and mother goose lost custody." - awsome line! Ciao, T/S
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On Wednesday, September 22, 2021, whisperingwalls
(219) wrote:
Respect your work, so your criticisms and praise are both welcome
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On Monday, November 2, 2015, Star
(920) wrote:
Completely accurate. Yes, I do want more.
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On Wednesday, September 22, 2021, whisperingwalls
(219) wrote:
Thank you for supporting my work!
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On Monday, November 2, 2015, Lux
(299) wrote:
This was insanely on point. I agree, I want more, but the finality of it is what gave it sauciness to the sadness. Bravo.
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On Wednesday, September 22, 2021, whisperingwalls
(219) wrote:
Thank you kindly! If you want more, you are welcome to read more of my works :p
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On Saturday, October 31, 2015, rwb35
(64) wrote:
I like it, but it leaves me wanting more. You write well
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On Wednesday, September 22, 2021, whisperingwalls
(219) wrote:
Much appreciated!
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