Guilty

By The Crimson Queen

.Abandoned.

from across the room

NOTHING changes

screaming emptiness inside

playing house

with a bro-ken family

looks pretty

from the windowsill

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Copyright 2015 The Crimson Queen
Published on Monday, August 17, 2015.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Journal"
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  • darkdesires On Tuesday, November 15, 2016, darkdesires (139)By person wrote:

    I know the pain but you just have to remember sometimes broken is better than nothing. Glad to see you still can write heartfelt pieces.

  • Slingnasty On Tuesday, March 8, 2016, Slingnasty (138)By person wrote:

    Wow last line very poignant! Great write. Ty

  • Jesse Guzman On Sunday, September 6, 2015, Jesse Guzman (39)By person wrote:

    "Playing house with a bro-ken family". Great write!

  • haunted On Monday, August 17, 2015, haunted (851)By person wrote:

    I love this, its very haunting and the simple words in your last sentence just nailed it, it changed the perspective. so many ways to interpret this, but i'll keep mine because its fucking awesome! good job!

  • A former member wrote: I know this feeling all to well ... beautifully penned.

  • blue angel On Monday, August 17, 2015, blue angel (877)By person wrote:

    The melancholy hangs heavily from that window sill. I like it a lot. The simplicity speaks in volumes. Nicely penned. - blue angel

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