Bitter lake.
By Magdalena
I am silence while my surface is calm
no wind to make waves through my tranquility
the ghosts of those lost are sleeping
I wear the sun like sparkling diamonds
caught in a picture of captivating beauty
inviting like hypnotic whispers
come to me and feel my embrace
swim along my fluid caress the solution you long
I can wet the appetite of the most innocent life
come to me and play for a while
my liquid coldness is constant
lives have dipped within my soothing ripples
and I'm mistaken for friendliness
the weaker becoming blind to my dangers
that is when I take to their lungs
drowning their feeble attempts to catch breath
I bear down on the cries of a clutching soul
until my blackness envelopes pulling lifelessness deeper
trembling currents shift my bed
burying the debris fallen from my victims minds
the moon when full will raise the tide of my oceans heart
a swelling pulse of forceful energy in flow
every liquid quarter is drawn to her beautiful command
and the children of many shall be born
giving back to life that what has been taken
she anoints me with her reflection
equilibrium being restored by the hand of natures will
I am eternal and part of the ever evolving future
you will swim through my caress
regardless of the forewarning on the approaching winds
Author's Note:
The personification of water.Comments on "Bitter lake."
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On Friday, July 3, 2015, Magdalena
(615) wrote:
Thank you all, this was part of a collaboration I did with a male friend for a competition. Much appreciated.
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On Tuesday, June 23, 2015, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
"and I'm mistaken for friendliness the weaker becoming blind to my dangers that is when I take to their lungs" - excellence! This was beautiful and dark. Ciao, T/S
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A former member wrote:
Absolutely beautiful!!