Death Blooms.

By TheProphetUntold




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Rear view.

Crows in murder loom
o'er verdant asphalt tombs
an' bent thermal plumes.

Tunneling larvae exhume
abdominal rupture womb.

Death blooms.

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Copyright 2015 TheProphetUntold
Published on Monday, January 11, 2021.     Filed under: "Poetry"

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  • Mad Hatter On Wednesday, October 28, 2015, Mad Hatter (13)By person wrote:

    The sense of decay while reading this, loved it.

  • Kaleidoscope_Heart On Saturday, October 17, 2015, Kaleidoscope_Heart (111)By person wrote:

    Eerie... Potent. Death is all around, We will all be food for the earth and insects. Truth. In an odd way your poem disturbed me and comforted me in a very fast way. Haha! Thanks for the ride

  • my soul whispers On Tuesday, June 9, 2015, my soul whispers (5)By person wrote:

    "Crows in murder loom" is so incredibly vivid. That single line pleases the perfectionist in me indescribably.

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Monday, May 18, 2015, TropicalSnowstorm (1703)By person wrote:

    I agree, nice job and great visuals. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • soul_versing On Friday, May 15, 2015, soul_versing (882)By person wrote:

    You make the viscous cycle of decaying worth sound meaningful. You gave death a voice, and left a lasting impression floating carelessly throughout my mind. Superb! Scholar

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