short & bittersweet XIV

By RhymeBound

my compass crushed, my north star lies
beyond a cloud wall grey and black.
i kept screaming at the skies...
and all of them were screaming back...

~ RhymeBound

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Copyright 2015 RhymeBound
Published on Monday, March 30, 2015.     Filed under: "Structured" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

a very obscure reference to sonnet 116
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  • carlosjackal On Thursday, March 2, 2017, carlosjackal (3011)By person wrote:

    Once more into the abyss....Resonant...

  • A former member wrote: so impactful, this is so raw and tangible.

  • A former member wrote: there is a stark raving wildness here, a loneliness, the fury of helplessness.... i can hear you.

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