Rebirth

By cadymae

Fell down
sunk deep
soft muck
well bottom

Well's brick
rises red

squat square
clay browned
bricks rise

make space

Stand up

Head crests

lipped rim

light,
           squint

walk
           stride

Nothing's happened

yet

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Copyright 2015 cadymae
Published on Monday, March 16, 2015.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • sTr8-jAcKeT On Friday, December 14, 2018, sTr8-jAcKeT (841)By person wrote:

    My mind just shit a brick. Gj.

  • A former member wrote: Nice job I like how you formated this. Thanks for sharing and please keep writing.

  • Arch and Breezeblock On Monday, March 16, 2015, Arch and Breezeblock (76)By person wrote:

    the way this was formatted made my eyes feel like they were falling down the page- nice physicality, and i liked the reference to falling down a well/being born.

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