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.oO
By gumshoe
and another
swirls and passes
carried out to sea
caught
between the teeth
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Copyright 2015 gumshoe
Published on Monday, March 3, 3.
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On Friday, July 28, 2023, carlosjackal
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wrote:
I love how you've updated / edited this poem to something completely different yet acts as the perfect sequel to the original.
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On Thursday, January 4, 2018, Cassette
(1144) wrote:
I can't believe there isn't more comments on this.
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On Friday, December 23, 2016, soul_versing
(882) wrote:
Astonishing --Where I lack in comment, I make up for in rating. .bows.
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On Sunday, October 18, 2015, carlosjackal
(3015) wrote:
7 full stops, spaced out like beautiful stars in the blanket of the night sky. Zoom in closer and you see a poet burning 7 times over.
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