ana liil

By anaksunamun

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slits in the ribs admit light and red . it is too cold for lies and not caring
stuck with an open window all the time, O ten that might leap into the street with minimal encumberment jangling translucent asphalt against an elasticity of bones and her velvet and slpeen that you've been tossing toward a gutter, puts warm mouth and face against the streaming of her body. Pretend that you are dead it wont hurt as long, your pain should not seem less wondrous than your joy.



















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Copyright 2015 anaksunamun
Published on Wednesday, February 25, 2015.     Filed under: "Poetry"

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  • Cassette On Tuesday, January 2, 2018, Cassette (1144)By person wrote:

    this is full of something I can't put my finger on... I'm speechless.

  • A former member wrote: I guess the "tragic" thing for me in this is I honestly can't blame anyone for easily grasping the tone of this. A point to where feeling is feeling and nothing more. Good or bad its already fused into one entity. Possibly some are just born with the genetic blender in their heart? Maybe some are born hiding it better? Great pen.

  • anaksunamun On Wednesday, February 25, 2015, anaksunamun (91)By person wrote:

    Thank you all for your lovely comments, but moreso for taking a moment and reading .. many blessings to you all ♡

  • Flying indigo express On Tuesday, February 24, 2015, Flying indigo express (149)By person wrote:

    It is the cenobite song. The truth uniting the polarities between pain, pleasure, love, and hate. Until you realize that it is all just transcendent passions. Same energy, different names

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Tuesday, February 24, 2015, TropicalSnowstorm (1703)By person wrote:

    "Your pain should not seem less wonderous than your joy" - excellent! Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • Star On Tuesday, February 24, 2015, Star (920)By person wrote:

    This reminds me of a song by Ed Sheeran called the "A team" there's a line in that song that goes, "it's too cold for angels to fly" i thought that line fitted this poem perfectly. Beautiful, as always.

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