The Open Eye

By Flying indigo express

If I could And you would
And I try But you won't
But even if you would And I could What's the point   If I will And you won't   And I cry But you don't
Even if you could And I would Why try?   This again
Because .
.
. Maybe this doesn't get better
Maybe this is as good as it gets
The monkeys will always be monkeys
.
and 
.
I
.
.

was just wasting my breath

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Copyright 2014 Flying indigo express
Published on Sunday, December 28, 2014.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • heinzlet On Thursday, January 1, 2015, heinzlet (26)By person wrote:

    Hey Flying, you're truly exceptional, I love your style... Congrats on your MVP title! you totally deserve it, cheerio! :) PS: Deep words here, I enjoyed the read.

  • Flying indigo express On Thursday, January 1, 2015, Flying indigo express (149)By person wrote:

    Thank you, I was not expecting that...at all. I appreciate the complement. I am trying to map out a swim in this "Ocean at the End of the Lane".

  • heinzlet On Thursday, January 1, 2015, heinzlet (26)By person wrote:

    I noticed, Neil Gaiman that is, a wonderful book, one of my favorites:) "Monsters come in all shapes and sizes"

  • Crashoverride On Monday, December 29, 2014, Crashoverride (10)By person wrote:

    this is beautiful. live in the moment and dont open your mouth to try and explain it.

  • Flying indigo express On Monday, December 29, 2014, Flying indigo express (149)By person wrote:

    Thank you, sounds like sage advice to me!

  • A former member wrote: I like the flow. Truth well put.

  • Flying indigo express On Monday, December 29, 2014, Flying indigo express (149)By person wrote:

    Thank you very much, I appreciate the feedback.

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