architechture.

By Malice In Wonderland

I wish I could find you.
trapped in walls of nuerofire labyrinth
twisted in to the threads of your own intellect
you've captured your own world,
and I'm fast falling behind
straining to reach past the barriers
of two anomalies,
entwined by dna
and such shaky common ground.

But
I can only
stand and watch,
pounding on your doors and windows
hoping for a crack
in anything
a smile,
a window.

Just to know you understand,
if nothing else,
how much I love you.

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Copyright 2014 Rain In The Willows
Published on Sunday, December 21, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • soul_versing On Sunday, December 21, 2014, soul_versing (882)By person wrote:

    This was hard to swallow, and yet so beautifully scripted. Your baby understands far-more than we could ever grasp intellectually. .hugs from the far. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Guys don't have the same train of thought. Just remember that. Very sweet poem. Scholar

  • Malice In Wonderland On Sunday, December 21, 2014, Malice In Wonderland (987)By person wrote:

    Haha. The only 'man' in this poem is my autistic son, who has communication issues. :) Scholar

  • A former member wrote: This feels like it came from an emotional valley. The words I read spoke to thoughts and feelings I have had. It's like you want to tell someone how much you love them, but it seems like their mind is in another dimension that starts fading away. Scholar

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