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"Craving"
By Forever Cold
this is what I need
and all who do not understand can not grasp their reality..
you never felt the pain as I have...
call me what you will ..
forsake me for my lust..
but this never ending pain is always apart of me..
I feel it every step I take..
I smell it in the air..
I taste it on my lips..
it tempts me with every warm willing body that walks by me..
oh you have no idea the pain it causes me..
I shrink in to shadow ad fall to my knees..
"I can not, I will not.."
my hell is the body that I can not escape..
this craving I can't extinguished..
this hunger that is never satisfied..
I need to feel it to make through the day..
why must I feel guilt...
I walk home..
back in to the darkness..
the pain is over taking me..
every part of me urns to feel replenished..
gods I need this.....
*Slice*
as the blood runs down my cheek,
I finally feel some kind of relief..
the pain is finally gone..
(note: this may be a bit graphic for some, and if
any one need the content of this poem explained I will be happy to do so,
and I also want to apologies to any one I may have offended for that was
not my intention.)
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Copyright 2003 Jilley_
Published on Wednesday, September 3, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on ""Craving""
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On Sunday, October 5, 2003, Drea
(1443)
wrote:
i agree with everyone.. NEVER say apologize for you feelings. this is your oulet. this is how you deal. you put pen to paper and let it out. never let ppl get to you. if they dont like your work..
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On Sunday, October 5, 2003, Drea
(1443) wrote:
to hell with them...they just dont understand.. i however do.. and this is something that has struck a cord..i bare scars also.. and it too is a craving..~Drea~
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On Thursday, September 4, 2003, Ophelia
(221) wrote:
No need to apologize for expressing yourself isn't that what poetry is an expression of the poet,and no one should apologize for something so good any way.............O.
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On Thursday, September 4, 2003, worm
(1194) wrote:
at first I thought it was about vampires... then at the end, "oh! I get it now!"... jilley, apologize for nothing... certain things need to be said... worm
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On Wednesday, September 3, 2003, angelunderneath
(60) wrote:
I wouldnt apologize for it, besides, I dont think anyone will be offended anyway. It was a nice write, kinda cool in a way because at first it had me thinking it was about sex...I got it now though :)
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