Live

By Chalin

make the decision,
failure to complete
will result in denial
of your request.

lick your emotions,
fold them into an
envelope and send
far far away.

to be examined by
men who have no
right.

they say you love me.
you have no right to
tell me so.

they enforce the right.
while we hug the left.

i am at a loss,
hungry for what is denied.



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Copyright 2003 Chalin
Published on Wednesday, September 3, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • TropicalSnowstorm On Wednesday, September 24, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (1703)By person wrote:

    I loved it! The flow of the piece conveyed your emotion well. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • _Andrew_ On Wednesday, September 3, 2003, _Andrew_ (245)By person wrote:

    not a bad write, but i didnt care for the flow in this poem, it was too scattered *~*aNDReW*~*

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