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scatterer
By anaksunamun
1.1.1
however new the house. warm shadows still move around there / black holes,
openings in times,hourglassed sorrow.there is no longer anywhere to go.
Sun, hell and heaven are exhilaratingly interfused , like a remainder of
an earlier living, suffocating under the needle god. It helps to find places
where the flesh has been cut, bruised and broken. O gravedigger of old
belles and letters,do not let be shattered all you hold holy what is inside.
I had myself walled into this, in your moon silver sweater and your space
black eyes, shadows of sky / light onto the ground.
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Copyright 2014 anaksunamun
Published on Friday, October 17, 2014.
Filed under:
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On Tuesday, January 2, 2018, Cassette
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wrote:
hmmmm.... I'm not sure what to say here; floored as always but this seems like it deserves more than my speechlessness
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On Tuesday, November 4, 2014, FadedBlues
(2169) wrote:
...exploring scars. finding ghosts. your journey is timeless, the walls will not restrain you...
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On Wednesday, October 29, 2014, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
I love the feel of this piece, very well done! The line "however new the house. warm shadows still move around there" is especially fantastic, and was fun to picture and ponder. Ciao, T/S
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A former member wrote:
Just breath-taking can't wait to read 1.1.2.
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A former member wrote:
This post was administratively removed by Adam
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A former member wrote:
This post was administratively removed by TropicalSnowstorm
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On Friday, October 17, 2014, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
I am tired of you being insulting to the members here. If you have some insightful comments, please share them...but for the most part I have seen you criticize people for their appearance and for presenting things in a creative way. This is particularly obnoxious when you haven't even produced anything you care to post here.
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On Friday, October 17, 2014, anaksunamun
(91) wrote:
Thankyou for removing the comments. I appreciate it. I made it known that they were there for most of the day and they just remained. Although i could have removed them myself.. i think he needed to see that they were removed by an Admin. So thankyou.
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A former member wrote:
Personally, I would never want such comments removed. They are proof of affect, or at the very least, confusion &/or confounded-ness. Sometimes I strive for such things.
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