three lines

By Bashost

abandoned house...
a china doll in the attic window
gazes at the moon

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Copyright 2014 Bashost
Published on Tuesday, August 19, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Natternes On Saturday, September 13, 2014, Natternes (26)By person wrote:

    I very much envy your ability to paint such a vivid picture using so few words. A very big well done!

  • Miztaken4beauty On Tuesday, August 19, 2014, Miztaken4beauty (177)By person wrote:

    Sometimes the greatest loneliness can be self imposed. Sometimes we are not so much abandoned as we are staying separate. It rarely feels that way though. Nice write!

  • whisperingwalls On Tuesday, August 19, 2014, whisperingwalls (219)By person wrote:

    frightening as a whole. well done.

  • A former member wrote: This is short but huge in imagery and meaning.. Very well penned!.. :)

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