three lines
By Bashost
abandoned house...
a china doll in the attic window
gazes at the moon
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Copyright 2014 Bashost
Published on Tuesday, August 19, 2014.
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"Poetry"
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On Saturday, September 13, 2014, Natternes
(26) wrote:
I very much envy your ability to paint such a vivid picture using so few words. A very big well done!
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On Tuesday, August 19, 2014, Miztaken4beauty
(177) wrote:
Sometimes the greatest loneliness can be self imposed. Sometimes we are not so much abandoned as we are staying separate. It rarely feels that way though. Nice write!
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On Tuesday, August 19, 2014, whisperingwalls
(219) wrote:
frightening as a whole. well done.
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A former member wrote:
This is short but huge in imagery and meaning.. Very well penned!.. :)