My Lover (revisited and revised)

By SickSanityJenn

Show me wonder, show me greed 
Slit my wrists and watch me bleed 
take my heart and rape my soul 
Break me down to make you whole 
 
Look at me with love and scorn 
You're lost inside both broke and torn 
Through the anger love did grow 
Kiss me now and kill me slow 
 
Pilfer my money, subdue my mind 
Confused and twisted up inside 
Kiss my lips, touch my breast 
Rip my heart out of my chest 
 
You want more but inside I'm dead 
Laying there upon your bed 
Eyes fade blank, lips turn blue 
There's nothing of me left for you

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Copyright 2014 SickSanityJenn
Published on Tuesday, August 19, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Brutally honest and open piece here well done

  • SickSanityJenn On Tuesday, August 19, 2014, SickSanityJenn (260)By person wrote:

    Thank you so much

  • Commander_Cadaver On Tuesday, August 19, 2014, Commander_Cadaver (245)By person wrote:

    Damn. If this is your lover, I wonder how your most hated enemy is. But yeah, a nice write dripping with emotion.

  • SickSanityJenn On Tuesday, August 19, 2014, SickSanityJenn (260)By person wrote:

    Thank you... It sucks when old wounds reopen and fester.... Start feeling like a corpse dressed up in lies and false life

  • Commander_Cadaver On Tuesday, August 19, 2014, Commander_Cadaver (245)By person wrote:

    Sadly, I think that's all we really are. Just shambling corpses living a lie, baring scars and fresh cuts of the life we are forced to live. Depressing zombies.

  • SickSanityJenn On Tuesday, August 19, 2014, SickSanityJenn (260)By person wrote:

    Depressing Zombies.... I like that

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