Said the Spider to the Fly....

By A Velvet Tongue

I sit alone
nestled in my famished web
silken veins of deceit
awaiting you

draped
in nothing but
dull latex
awaiting a spit shine


my nearly naked dowry
your delicious bait
300 eager promises
veiled in the coy of a wink


one single hour
will it take to bear my flesh
slowly, peel the black
from my alabaster organ

scan me slowly
every sumptuous inch
allow your thoughts to simmer
calculate your next move

Devils know I am only
biding my time
playing faux prey
with the lure of my honey

yes, come closer still
allow the pads of your fingers
to test my silken limbs
dare to take a taste..

for when I take your back
within what seems like
a dozen nimble arms
I will render you..paralyzed

helpless and hopeless
a pulsating cocoon
my wiles, dark and deadly
swinging on the pendulum of a moment

and when my teeth
rip the innocense, from your flesh
they will drive to bare bone.. deeper
to the bowels of spooning rapture

Only then, to add to my sadistic harem
Will I leave you bound
tucked to one favored corner
of my shimmering web...

The gift of anticipation
I will offer upon the edge
of continuum, my own hunger
an unfaltering metronome

In this splay of my wiles
you will feel me consume
what was rightfully mine
the moment you stumbled upon my web..




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Copyright 2003 Beverly L Hernandez
Published on Monday, September 1, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: wow, beautiful...... It's an accurate description of what lots of people feel sex is like, that's definitly how I feel.

  • A former member wrote: heh.. the erotic edge on this cuts like a knife... how could someone miss that? Bravo

  • Blood of Winter On Friday, September 5, 2003, Blood of Winter (296)By person wrote:

    another vivid masterpiece, when are you going to get this stuff published and get some money for your time.

  • Chameleon On Wednesday, September 3, 2003, Chameleon (111)By person wrote:

    You are deemed the QUEEN of sexuality...velvet, no one take that from you...loved it, as usual.

  • Blinded_Tiger On Wednesday, September 3, 2003, Blinded_Tiger (518)By person wrote:

    Amazing. Is it just me Vel or are you improving all the time. Now I believe you are, and that is just great! :) Tiger

  • The Fallen Angel On Tuesday, September 2, 2003, The Fallen Angel (235)By person wrote:

    Incredible write...enticing imagery... invading my thoughts with wicked seduction...(plead the fly to the spider,"Pleeese dooon't eat meee!"+Fallen Angel+

  • A Velvet Tongue On Wednesday, September 3, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (436)By person wrote:

    Yummmmmmmmm..but you are so tasty!!! *winx*

  • manywalks On Tuesday, September 2, 2003, manywalks (750)By person wrote:

    Ah, what a nearly addictive taste this had, injecting itself into my mind and growing there. ~ mw

  • A former member wrote: You have a talent beyond many. When a poet can take the reader inside their scene, to the heart of their thoughts, and leave them wanting more everytime, then you know there lies a gift, continuously unwrapping; and inside a beautiful plant, with a giant

  • A former member wrote: bud, ready to bloom, above the entire land, to the eyes of all

  • A former member wrote: Incredible imagery and attention to detail. Great job. ~SI~

  • hate_doll On Monday, September 1, 2003, hate_doll (265)By person wrote:

    you're a trip, really you are bevvie lov. your poetry is the sweetest fruit...I crave your writing with each 5 senses...you'll never cease to amaze me...this one is no different...passionate, haunting, sultry...everything...crazy good, babe, crazy

  • KittyStryker On Monday, September 1, 2003, KittyStryker (711)By person wrote:

    ah... very sensual... always loved the fatality of those who fell into the spider's web...

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