Tanka

By BetaWolfinVA

three lines dance unrhymed
syllables five seven five
and one thought stated
two lines continue the thought
both are seven syllables

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Copyright Thursday, 24 July 2014 HHMCameron
Published on Thursday, July 24, 2014.     Filed under: "Structured" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Refresher for my other form, wonder if i am doing it right, but as the sylable is not the same as the "on" can a westerner ever get it right...
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