Wicked Jack and Jill

By vicimineo

Let's see...
Which story should I share today
​which one works best to thrill,
I think I'll tell you the story of
wicked Jack and Jill.

Behind her smile of serenity
Jill's hardened heart was black,
So nothing could prepare the world
when wicked Jill met Jack.

Now Jack he thought he ruled his world
was the king upon his hill,
​But he was brought down to his knees
the moment he met Jill.

Together you see, now Jack and Jill
were quite an abominable pair,
Their lust for blood and depravity
was far beyond compare.

So they set out to find innocents
in which to victimize,
Bent on feeding on their souls
determined to hear their cries.

They lured them in one by one
with promises of pleasure and pain,
But once a soul traveled up that hill
that's where that soul remained.

So my friends, if you are feeling brave
please do, travel up that hill,
You just might find you like the pain
provided by Jack and Jill.



 

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Copyright 2014 vicimineo
Published on Thursday, July 24, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Fucking clever as fuck! Ha! Bloody brilliant ink...deffo one to read to your kids 😈

  • A former member wrote: Interesting piece.

  • A former member wrote: An invitation to pain and suffering well scripted imagery here with great rhyme and flow well done cheers

  • vicimineo On Monday, July 21, 2014, vicimineo (31)By person wrote:

    Thanks...just my twisted take on a nursery rhyme.

  • vicimineo On Sunday, July 20, 2014, vicimineo (31)By person wrote:

    Yes...yes I do...And I love everyone of them. ;)

  • A former member wrote: Wow.. This piece is very well penned and the story behind is somehow tantalizing... Like an invitation to change to the dark side and to embrace the weckedness.. I really enjoyed the read.. Thank you for sharing! :)

  • vicimineo On Sunday, July 20, 2014, vicimineo (31)By person wrote:

    Well now there's that word again.....tantalizing.... it really roles off the tongue does it not...And thank you once again for reading Darkisses.

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