Coming Together

By mikeygreenleaf

You strike a chord inside of me
That resonates quite differently
Our souls will mingle for a time
Energies will interwine
I'll be yours and you'll be mine
But only for a moments time
Spirits join us in this room
Dancing to our cosmic tune
Now as our thirds see eye to eye
Sensations start to multiply
Chakras become deeply imbued
With overflowing gratitude
A kiss will seal this sacred pact
To never hold each other back
From being friends and living life
I love you til the day I die

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Copyright 2014 mikeygreenleaf
Published on Friday, July 18, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • soul_versing On Thursday, September 11, 2014, soul_versing (882)By person wrote:

    his one, this one right here is perfection in a bottle. Every line pulling deeper on my heartstrings and bringing to life that tiny twinkle that's now burning brighter than before. You, sir, are quite the brilliant spindle of hope we poets look for. .hugs Scholar

  • Magdalena On Saturday, July 19, 2014, Magdalena (616)By person wrote:

    This piece has much potential. You used "ab" rhyme scheme until the last two lines, which lost the rhythm (maybe another word instead of using "time" twice also) otherwise, well done.

  • Magdalena On Saturday, July 19, 2014, Magdalena (616)By person wrote:

    Hope you don't mind my critique. :)

  • mikeygreenleaf On Saturday, July 19, 2014, mikeygreenleaf (89)By person wrote:

    Not at all! the beautiful thing about art is that YOU are the creator :)

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