a Fight to the Death: Velociraptor Vs. Zippy, the Rabid Gerbil.

By Malice In Wonderland

There was never really any doubt,
was there?

scaled sinew tears through furry flesh
bathing in disease and corroded entrails

the loser
takes on a winners form

 

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Copyright 2014 Rain In The Willows
Published on Monday, May 19, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

...this is really stupid....
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  • Vulture On Sunday, December 14, 2014, Vulture (61)By person wrote:

    poor poor zippy. alas poor furball I knew him well. now to run like hell before I become dessert.

  • A former member wrote: Twas an epic battle.

  • A former member wrote: Wow...how very absolutely shocking in the most nonchalant way, ha! You don't even know how esoteric it is, or you'd not say it's shit. "the loser takes on a winners form"...that's deep, man! Moving on to the green groves of freedom in the rabid gerbil heavens...not so bad, not so bad a'tall. So...which one won???? My septims are on Velociraptor!!!!!

  • A former member wrote: Oh..wait...it was gerbil v/s gerbil...wasn't it? HA!

  • Malice In Wonderland On Thursday, May 29, 2014, Malice In Wonderland (987)By person wrote:

    dinosaur kills gerbil, gets rabies, died. rabies wins ;) Scholar

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