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Phantoms in the Night
By Malice In Wonderland
the clouds are against us today
screaming warnings against rough hewn electrics
a funnel cloud
kisses the ground
in long awaited anticipation
spiraling into seamless cataclysms
pandemonium is embraced by fear
and towns turned to salamungandi
We are but the remains of dismembered dreams
houses crushed into matchstick massacre
flames calling forth the potpourri of an ending
that came far too soon.
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Copyright 2014 Rain In The Willows
Published on Wednesday, May 7, 2014.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
eh.
Comments on "Phantoms in the Night"
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A former member wrote:
Eh? You and wonderland hysteria, i swear. Eh? Uhmm...did you see that one line? "We are but the remains of dismembered dreams
"...who wrote that....Poe? Emerson? Faulkner? C'mon, woman! That's some classic shit right there. Not to mention that it's a fraggoff WINNER of a contest, and all you can give it is an 'eh'? Sheeeit.
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On Monday, May 19, 2014, Poetic-Realm
(240)
wrote:
So good I almost forgot you added in bonus words. Way to make me feel bad for not trying hahaha. Very deserving of the win and even more so of many more reads.
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A former member wrote:
congratulations, my love. well deserved.
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A former member wrote:
When are the clouds not against us? Visions of tornadoes and firestorms here.
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A former member wrote:
wicked entry. sickflow. showcases the natural beauty of chaos and disaster. good luck, babe.
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On Wednesday, May 7, 2014, BetaWolfinVA
(912) wrote:
loved it as usual :)
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