Empty Space - Spoken Word Version

By TropicalSnowstorm


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Copyright 2014 TropicalSnowstorm
Published on Wednesday, April 30, 2014.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

About returning to the US after time in Afghanistan.
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  • soul_versing On Friday, January 8, 2016, soul_versing (1188)By person wrote:

    I won't lie, this piece was a lot to take in. My compassionate nature compels me to reach out to those in need, while my reserved nature compels me into a safe zone. I guess my mental state isn't that far off the grid that it forces my wandering shell back on track. ***such strong depth in your delivery. You spoke with such passion that it truly moved me. -applauds Scholar

  • greyspell On Friday, July 11, 2014, greyspell (37)By person wrote:


  • Magdalena On Thursday, May 29, 2014, Magdalena (790)By person wrote:

    A wonderful audio and video.... I did watch it on your YT channel a while back. Great work TS.

  • Dancing_Monkey On Wednesday, May 7, 2014, Dancing_Monkey (1288)By person wrote:

    Great piece.

  • haunted On Wednesday, April 30, 2014, haunted (1201)By person wrote:

    and welcome home, my daughter is in the navy and just returned to the states. its very emotional and im glad your back home.

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Thursday, May 1, 2014, TropicalSnowstorm (1715)By person wrote:

    Thanks! I have actually been back since 2005 and wrote this back then, but I wanted to use this one to experiment with the visual medium. A friend of mine has a warehouse with all the "props" and I thought it would compliment the piece. Glad your daughter is back! Scholar

  • haunted On Wednesday, April 30, 2014, haunted (1201)By person wrote:

    wow that is really cool. I loved the poem and its illustrated as well by the things around you. and some cool stuff to, lol.. I loved it, great job!

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