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Silent Master
By darkheartmagic
The words we plant,They need no light to grow,
Nor water for the strength to
keep our rooted words of silence cold.
Some say that silent is so peacefull,
but to me it screams of pain,
Uncover your eyes
ungreatfull, and bleed this in your vein.
For I"m your filthy
thoughts, That your to scared to speak,
I am your puppet master, that
makes you wet your silken sheets.
I take complete control
, Not with words, but screams of silence
listen and do as you are told, I can
see your thoughts behind your eyelids.
I punish
you so deeply, and spank your little bottom,
I bath your tears of invy
that leaves you on your pillow sobbing.
Silence is a blanket, Covering the scares
Silently
we make it, and it makes us who we are.
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Copyright 2014 darkheartmagic
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On Monday, January 25, 2016, Melancholic VIncent
(430)
wrote:
Great writing! I just want you to highlight some errors you gave, for self-learning. Watch out for "Peacefull", "ungreatfull", it should be said "Peaceful" and "ungrateful". Hope you didn't mind, it is for the sake of self-learning. Continue on the path of poetry
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On Wednesday, July 22, 2015, dwells
(4285) wrote:
Some great lines DHM; reduced to bed-wetting by the power of words, and emphasized with the deafening sound of silence. BTW - as you imply, our minds are the supreme torturers. She'll not be taking you home to meet her mother, sadly :) Well done my friend! - Dan
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On Friday, May 2, 2014, Intoxicating Delirium
(275) wrote:
Wow, what a wonderful job with this... I know the feeling, I surround myself with people all of the time mostly because I don't want to be alone with my thoughts.... The silence kills. Great write :)
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On Tuesday, April 29, 2014, TheAmazingCagedOne
(21) wrote:
This sounds like it should be a song! Really raw, and great write. You did it again. (:
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On Tuesday, April 29, 2014, darkheartmagic
(82) wrote:
Thank you it's good to be back.
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On Wednesday, April 23, 2014, blue angel
(877) wrote:
Masterful inking. Seeking thoughts of desire in silence. "bleed this in your vein" That is a powerful visual.
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On Thursday, April 24, 2014, darkheartmagic
(82) wrote:
Thank you so much I finally finished this one and changed it around a bit hope you enjoy
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