hungarian star

By anaksunamun

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trains rattle without sounds of bells.
& the stars which you cherished pronounce you in pain in piles of catholic red, lonesome to please collected gentlemen sleeping you off in cobweb light. Soon you'll be alone Shimmer. Wishing you'd enjoyed it more while it were happening warm around your neck.
O how often I want to bite my fingers off.























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Copyright 2014 anaksunamun
Published on Wednesday, April 16, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

with their foreheads touching as if about to be hung by a single rope from the high ceiling.
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  • Cassette On Tuesday, January 2, 2018, Cassette (1144)By person wrote:

    you're a brilliant poet.

  • Tonights Decision On Saturday, May 24, 2014, Tonights Decision (137)By person wrote:

    a sense of helplessness, ratling down the rails somwhere in eastern europe, the burning anger underneath, and pangs of... shame? You are building worlds , and im enchanted once again

  • Alchemist On Saturday, April 26, 2014, Alchemist (688)By person wrote:

    Your words are striking and I will be reading more of your work for sure. Not sure how new you are but welcome to the Valley, please stay awhile.

  • A former member wrote: I absolutely love it. Poetry is the art of words, and you are like a Picasso of poetry with the way your words weave together into something breathtaking. A beautiful story is written by your words.

  • A former member wrote: i want this tattooed on my ribs. so profound and surreally enchanting. your words are so handsome with such a lasting spirit to them. it's like the world is your cave, and every whisper is crescendoed and amplified, no matter how brief or ephemeral a glimpse you give us. it sends me into a melodic trance of sorts. i race to every post you make and savor the taste, considering what you say and what you refrain from saying, the symbolism, reflecting, mirroring, becoming these preciously chosen words sometimes for hours, under your spell before i dare comment.. i imagine you like charlotte, weaving webs of welcome tirelessly through the night, spinning silk, wearing yourself into slumber because you pour until the last drop... until it's an immaculate xconception of your vision. as ever, you are poignant, striking, soulful. i feel blessed to read you. thank you for this and piece of you that you've shared. xo

  • FadedBlues On Thursday, April 17, 2014, FadedBlues (2172)By person wrote:

    ...the rhapsody of trains. you invade the dreams of those slumbering men...

  • haunted On Wednesday, April 16, 2014, haunted (851)By person wrote:

    haha I swear your words penetrate like nothing can. your poetry amazes me and what sets you apart from others is your very unique style. sometimes your poems, like this one, makes me want to run to a church and seek shelter. haha its just so potent. your words are fantastic, and I think you should write spells because thse leave me bewitched every time. im in love your poetry, I cant even say anymore with out falling all over myself. awesome!

  • Intoxicating Delirium On Wednesday, April 16, 2014, Intoxicating Delirium (275)By person wrote:

    Wow! I love the feeling this leaves you with. Just lingering .. Great write :)

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