time is Time is . . .
By ForestWolf
disbelief
snorts out its fear,
its arrogance a cold cloak
I know what I know,
saw what I saw. . . .
light emits
whispers rustle
blue trees bend,
remaining slient
voices float downstream
heavy moons, full
hang above
time is Time is
missing, not lost
withheld in a floating orb
I know what I know,
saw what I saw . . .
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Copyright 2014 ForestWolf
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On Friday, May 5, 2023, carlosjackal
(3015) wrote:
So much mystery in this piece. Stunning work.
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A former member wrote:
I saw it, too, buddy. You are not alone. I strive for this kind of eloquence. There's an understanding here I appreciate a whole lot. I haven't welcomed you to DP yet, FW...my commenting is sporadic at best these days. You sing of the nights I recognize...."they'll never believe what I am watching ~right now~"...& they never do. Love your minimalist approach. Masterfully spun. Good to read you. Please stick around?
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On Sunday, March 9, 2014, ForestWolf
(5) wrote:
Thank you dark unicorn. The poem is based on real experiences. . .
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On Sunday, March 9, 2014, Dark Unicorn
(49) wrote:
The way the words just seem to naturally roll off your tongue when you read this!This poem is evidence that simplicity goes a long way!Well done!Although I do wander if this is based on actual events...hmmm...