time is Time is . . .

By ForestWolf

disbelief
snorts out its fear, 
its arrogance a cold cloak

I know what I know, 
saw what I saw. . . . 

light emits
whispers rustle
blue trees bend, 
remaining slient

voices float downstream
heavy moons, full
hang above

time is Time is
missing, not lost
withheld in a floating orb

I know what I know,
saw what I saw . . . 

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Copyright 2014 ForestWolf
Published on Saturday, March 8, 2014.     Filed under: "Fantasy" and "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Friday, May 5, 2023, carlosjackal (3015)By person wrote:

    So much mystery in this piece. Stunning work.

  • A former member wrote: I saw it, too, buddy. You are not alone. I strive for this kind of eloquence. There's an understanding here I appreciate a whole lot. I haven't welcomed you to DP yet, FW...my commenting is sporadic at best these days. You sing of the nights I recognize...."they'll never believe what I am watching ~right now~"...& they never do. Love your minimalist approach. Masterfully spun. Good to read you. Please stick around?

  • ForestWolf On Sunday, March 9, 2014, ForestWolf (5)By person wrote:

    Thank you dark unicorn. The poem is based on real experiences. . .

  • Dark Unicorn On Sunday, March 9, 2014, Dark Unicorn (49)By person wrote:

    The way the words just seem to naturally roll off your tongue when you read this!This poem is evidence that simplicity goes a long way!Well done!Although I do wander if this is based on actual events...hmmm...

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