Black

By Intoxicating Delirium

Black...

Is all I see

You were a flash

Burning

Me up

Until there was

Nothing left

Of my soul, but

Black...

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Copyright 2014 Intoxicating Delirium
Published on Saturday, March 28, 2015.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • darkheartmagic On Saturday, September 12, 2015, darkheartmagic (93)By person wrote:

    The Black it comes to recreate the mind, the will we seperat

  • Pride Ed On Saturday, November 8, 2014, Pride Ed (113)By person wrote:

    So much in so little. Lovely!

  • DestinysDevil On Wednesday, April 23, 2014, DestinysDevil (9)By person wrote:

    Loved it, black is imagination and where we hide it's the leaves that cover a cold dead corpse or the peace where a mother sleeps. Great job

  • A former member wrote: Very to the point I love poems that express little but say everything we are feeling. Good job on poem. Really loved it

  • FadedBlues On Monday, March 3, 2014, FadedBlues (2989)By person wrote:

    ...a brief brilliant flame that burned away all the color. splendid in black...

  • haunted On Saturday, March 1, 2014, haunted (1208)By person wrote:

    haha I used to hang around a person like this, constantly feeding my dark side. theres many shades of black in the dark, anywhere from depression to just down right evil, and everything in between. my favorite shade of black is the kind when people go out of there way to judge you as evil and dark and scary and creepy. I always just say, thank you! because that's the intention, that's what I feel inside and black is just the reflection I cast. and I cant be damned by being happy. excellent poem, short and sweet and very blunt and effective, a clear picture and its awesome Caitlin.

  • Strataic On Saturday, March 1, 2014, Strataic (155)By person wrote:

    Black is the colour we all wear, until it's time to change. Good read, thanks. Scholar

  • chelzbites On Friday, February 28, 2014, chelzbites (12)By person wrote:

    gets straight to eh point/message. to be honest how i feel sometimes.although my soul/heart is black, there always those very few people whose allowed in the open area

  • BloodyMercy On Friday, February 28, 2014, BloodyMercy (73)By person wrote:

    Very quick and exact. ..almost surgical. .. very good write.

  • SplitScreenPlay On Friday, February 28, 2014, SplitScreenPlay (36)By person wrote:

    You reflected the feeling perfectly. Nice. Great write!

  • Commander_Cadaver On Friday, February 28, 2014, Commander_Cadaver (247)By person wrote:

    I like it. ...I mean not that all you see is black, but the writing.

  • A former member wrote: Simple, yet affective. I am really drawn to the physical symmetrical structure that the lines make. Very well done.

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