when the moon met the sun.

By Star

now as the moon kissed
the sun goodnight.
he said unto her
"don't you cry,
I've gathered your tears
and laid them down around me.
and I've called them stars."
as they shine bright as your eyes,
so, I'm not so alone
in the darkness.

and I'll love you
Until Summer becomes
cold.

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© 2014 Brandi Lea
Published on Monday, February 24, 2014.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Lux On Friday, May 9, 2014, Lux (334)By person wrote:

    To be loved in such a manner... It seems I will ever be envious of the moon. Her tears are gorgeous though, so I must remember to thank her for them. An excellently wrought poem.

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Monday, March 3, 2014, TropicalSnowstorm (1690)By person wrote:

    "and I'll love you Until Summer becomes cold." - lovely imagery throughout! Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • soul_versing On Tuesday, February 25, 2014, soul_versing (1224)By person wrote:

    Gorgeously poetic. ...and the Goddess fell in love with The Star. .kisses. Scholar

  • LilNicky On Tuesday, February 25, 2014, LilNicky (16)By person wrote:

    Absolutely love this piece. As stated before in another comment, very gentle and beautiful. Had an excellent visual on this one and thank you for that.

  • SickSanityJenn On Monday, February 24, 2014, SickSanityJenn (238)By person wrote:

    i agree... this is beautiful. i love it. the way it flows sweetly

  • A former member wrote: a blanket of tears that fall and give light and hope... how fitting. i love it.

  • Melankolia On Monday, February 24, 2014, Melankolia (70)By person wrote:

    Beautiful. :)

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