Goddess in the Mist
By megaprime81
As i lay down on the ground,
The Goddess appears, in the mist
A lady of dark fury
Seeking vengeance upon my soul
Wreaking havoc upon my soul
"My love for you, Dear Goddess,"
I profess, and not deny, but profess,
"What is it you desire?"
"I desire your all," she says,
"You have not given your all to me.
"You've disappointed me, my servant.
"GIVE ME YOUR ALL. Do as I say,
"You worthless worm! All that i say,
"All that I ask of you, that you should do,
"Or face my endless wrath!"
"Goddess, I want not your wrath
"Upon my head. I seek to please you
"And honor your will.
"What is it you desire?"
I reply.
"Go now," She responds, "And comment.
"You need not merely to seek praise for
"Your work, nor expressly for mine;
"Others need your input. If you desire
"Me as you say, this shall you do."
So, I set out to please my Goddess.
Should I fail, her wrath shall fall upon my head,
And I will be no more....
Author's Note:
I wrote this for my Goddess, whom i feel i have failed. Her will is my desire.Comments on "Goddess in the Mist"
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On Monday, February 24, 2014, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
I appreciate your input, but i have strong feelings for a certain angel. She's so sweet.
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On Monday, February 24, 2014, Melankolia
(46) wrote:
I like a dominant woman :) Surely she will reward your obedience. I like this narrative a lot. Well written and received.
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On Monday, February 24, 2014, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
Obedience is the key to eternity.
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On Monday, February 24, 2014, blue angel
(877) wrote:
interesting... your servitude is evident. Watch the ways of your treading. she sees your efforts and wills your ways, without doubt. Nicely written*
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On Monday, February 24, 2014, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
Thank you. :-)