sno

By anaksunamun

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spring wind strays , rinses and dyes the leaves
morning is stirred and wilts overnight


I will keep you cold

crawl nearer.











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Copyright 2014 anaksunamun
Published on Sunday, February 23, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Cassette On Thursday, December 28, 2017, Cassette (1144)By person wrote:

    "morning is stirred and wilts overnight" ........what a line

  • Lady Grinning Soul On Sunday, December 28, 2014, Lady Grinning Soul (145)By person wrote:

    Simply elegant. The useage and placement of everything.... divine... and worthy of poem of the day.

  • A former member wrote: so elegant! i like the use of space, the awareness of the placement of the words...feels so crisp and fresh, almost oddly aromatic? thank you for writing ♡

  • Tonights Decision On Tuesday, May 13, 2014, Tonights Decision (137)By person wrote:

    feels like wakeing up to late april snow with the window open, a fleeting feeling that stays with you.

  • Poetic-Realm On Sunday, May 4, 2014, Poetic-Realm (258)By person wrote:

    This....... THIS!!!!

  • A former member wrote: Loved this one...haiku darkness, with a hint of green like a magical forest, or the forest of an exhibition, in a strange, unique museum...loved it.

  • FadedBlues On Sunday, February 23, 2014, FadedBlues (2172)By person wrote:

    ...I like the green in your poem, the gentle rain...

  • anaksunamun On Tuesday, March 25, 2014, anaksunamun (91)By person wrote:

    Thankyou for reading ♡

  • soul_versing On Sunday, February 23, 2014, soul_versing (882)By person wrote:

    Beautiful depth in this haiku. The cold preserves the inner beauty within and it should be cherished. This made me smile with all its elegance. Hello there poet and welcome to the valley... If you need help with anything I'm only an email away. Bows- Scholar

  • anaksunamun On Friday, February 28, 2014, anaksunamun (91)By person wrote:

    Thankyou ♡

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